Launching Song Bird 2 The Battle of Bug World

Song Bird 2Launching Song Bird 2 The Battle of Bug World with award-winning author Karen Tyrrell.

I’m THRILLED to invite you to the official launch of a very special book ‘The Battle of Bug World’ Song Bird 2.
I will present an FUN interactive story telling session with sweet prizes and surprises galore!

Launching Song Bird 2, the sequel to Song Bird Superhero (Song Bird 1)

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Can Song Bird save her kidnapped sister, the bees and the Planet before it’s too late?

Brisbane author, Karen Tyrrell launches her 9th empowering book to teach kids and grown-ups how to live strong. It’s her 7th book for children.

The Battle of Bug World is about three friends who battle bugs, baddies and bullies to save the bees and the planet.   Book info HERE.

BUZZ … BUZZ Join the sweet FUN.  Help save the BEES and the environment!

What’s the Buzz?

PRE-ORDER Song Bird 2 with FREE postage … Here

Song Bird 2 has a Sponsor!

I’m proud to announce Capilano Honey will sponsor the launch of The Battle of Bug World. We have a sweet partnership with this Australian Company. Capilano thinks Song Bird 2 is sweeter than honey!

Capilano Honey will donate raffle prizes and FREE gift bags to those attending the launch. Please book your seat so we have enough bags for everyone.

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I hope you can join me, Karen Tyrrell (author) and Trevor Salter (cover illustrator) in celebrating its release!

Book readings and signings.

Guest Speaker – Meet SUPER Bee, hero of Bug World.

PRIZES: For Best bee, bird or bug costume.
RAFFLES:  I will give away three baskets of goodies.

FREE: Fun Crafty activities for Kids to enjoy.

BOOKS: will be available for purchase

Morning Tea provided

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When: Saturday 24 June 11.00 am

Where:  Logan North Library

2-6 Sports Drive, Underwood, QLD, Australia.

Please RSVP for catering purposes.
Call: 07 3412 4140 to reserve your seat

RSVP on the Facebook Event  page HERE

Are you joining the FUN?

RSVP: Have you booked your seat yet?

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BEE-lieve New Cover New Book Reveal

Cover-revealBEE-lieve … I’m celebrating my brand new book cover … plus the title and the blurb.

I’m thrilled to show you my children’s book I’ve worked on for the last 18 months.

THANK YOU to my awesome friends, fans, critique buddies and Beta readers for your kind encouragement. I’m deeply grateful for your support. Hugs xx

BEE-lieve the Cover

Eco fantasy adventure The Battle of Bug World (Song Bird 2) is finally here! Rosella Ava Bird battles to save the bees and the Planet.

It’s the story about the POWER of friends and self-BEElief. Sequel to Song Bird Superhero (Song Bird 1) by Karen Tyrrell (that’s me).

Trevor Salter illustrated the cover.

Anthony Puttee of Book Cover Café designed my action-packed cover and book.

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BEE-lieve the author, Karen Tyrrell

I’m an award-winning Brisbane author and school teacher, launching my 7th children’s book. On my writing journey, I’ve achieved three awards, three literary grants and a mentorship with the Society of Editors. I gained hundreds of *5 STAR reviews for my books to empower kids to live STRONG.

BEE-lieve Jackie French, Order of Australia

Jackie French, renowned children’s author supports my empowering messages in Song Bird 2, saying:

‘Friends who stand together ALWAYS have Super powers.’Jackie French, Australian Children’s Laureate 2014-2015.

Her quote sits proudly on the very top of my cover.

BEE-lieve the Blurb

Two friends, one bullied, one disabled, risk everything to battle bugs, cyclones and bullies to save the planet.

“A superstorm destroys Rosella Ava Bird’s flower garden.

All the bees are disappearing.

A giant sinkhole cracks open beneath Rosie’s school bus, and mysterious voices rise up from the depths.

A tornado blasts the house of Frank, Rosie’s sinister next-door neighbor, threatening Rosie’s family.

And Rosie’s sister, Raven, has gone missing.

Should Rosie lead a mission into Bug World to rescue Raven?

Or stay home and save her family?”

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PRE-ORDER

BEE-Lieve: PRE-ORDER a signed, stamped copy of The Battle of Bug World (Song Bird 2) with a numbered, laminated certificate.

Now available as a PRE-ORDER with FREE postage HERE

The Battle of Bug World

AUTHOR: Karen Tyrrell

ISBN: 9780994302182

PUBLISHER: Digital Future Press

BEE-lieve in yourself and you can fly!!

What do You BEE-lieve about The Battle of Bug World?

I would LOVE to hear from you. Your feedback is appreciated.

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Supercharge your Writing SUPER Guide

SuperchargeSUPERcharge your writing and publish your book. How?

Who wants to create page-turning stories and characters bursting with vibrant energy?

My name’s Karen Tyrrell, Brisbane survivor of bullying and PTSD. I’m passionate about self-empowerment and well-being. I’m now the award-winning author of eight empowering books, soon to be nine. I’d like to share my secrets to writing and publishing.

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Why SUPERcharge your characters and story?

Readers want stories they can emotionally connect with. Stories that hook them in from the very first line. Intriguing stories with characters they deeply care about. Readers want to read emotionally, supercharged stories with HIGH stakes. Stories that bring them to tears or make them laugh.

Gripping stories that inspire, entertain or educate.

SUPERcharge your Writing Routines

  1. Write passionately about what you care about every single day.
  2. Create stories that drive you as a human being. Your intense passion and energy will connect with readers.

SUPERcharge your story

  1. Start your story at an intriguing pivotal turning point.
  2. Supercharge your story with emotions, tension and conflict.
  3. Make every scene as cinematic as possible with believable detail.
  4. Write in an intriguing way, posing questions that need to be answered. Hook us in as readers.
  5. Create a fast-paced story full of super-action about characters you really care about.
  6. Raise the stakes as high as you can.
  7. Show cinematic close-up detail at confronting scenes and interactions in your story.

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SUPERcharge your characters

  1. Catapult your characters into absolute hell.
  2. Test your characters with brick-wall challenges.
  3. Makes us, the readers care deeply about your main character.
  4. Create characters who are likeable … or likeable rogues.

SUPERcharge your Writing Goals

  1. Visualize yourself completing your story or your book.
  2. Believe you will succeed … and you will.
  3. Set S.M.A.R.T. achievable goals for every day, every week, and long term goals for the month. And every 3 months.

My SUPERcharged memoirs 

My two memoirs, Me & Her: A Memoir of Madness  and Me & Him: A Guide to Recovery narrate a teacher’s recovery from parent-teacher bullying and PTSD.

SUPER hero books for kids

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I write books to empower kids to live strong. My action-packed stories burst with heart and humor.

STOP the Bully, Song Bird Superhero, Jo-Kin vs Lord TerraJo-Kin Battles the It (Super Space Kids series), Bailey Beats the BLAH and Harry Helps Grandpa Remember.

NEWSFLASH

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I’m announcing my ninth SUPER book next  Monday! … WHO wants to find out more?

How do you SUPER Charge your story and your characters?

What are you passionate about?

Please comment below  and LIKE, Google, Tweet… Thanks 🙂

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Reviews Song Bird Superhero Super Deal

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I’m celebrating my riveting Reviews and interviews for Song Bird Superhero!

From teeniest girl to most respected magazine, check out book reviews for Song Bird Superhero.

Pinch Me! I can’t believe what they said about my empowering children’s fantasy adventure.

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REVIEWS Song Bird Superhero

‘A sweet empowering story about being bullied and believing in yourself.

Can Rosie and her friend Amy, get super powers from singing, science and self-belief ?

An inspiring read by a great Australian author. ‘ — Disney Princess magazine

 

‘An imaginative tale that flies high.

Uplifting work about conquering bullies and staying true to oneself.’ — Kirkus Review

 

‘In a world where Super Girl and Wonder Woman are real, Rosella ‘Rosie’ Bird dreams of being able to fly.
Unfortunately, a series of dangerous engineering failures has left her parents less than supportive and with her bully neighbor Frank contriving to make her life miserable, Rosie feels attacked on all fronts.

Only her love of singing sustains her – and that is where the fun begins.’ — Buzz Words

Themes: friendship, bullies, self-esteem, resilience, disability, girl power, STEM science.

Fan Girl loves Song Bird Superhero

Fan Girl loves Song Bird Superhero

KID Reviews Song Bird Superhero

‘You HAVE to read this! I loved how the superhero had to discover her superpowers and learn how to use them, instead of just knowing straightaway.’ – 9 year-old

‘Real page turner’ – Charlotte: 11 year-old

I love the main character, Rosella Bird. I share many things, my love of science, my bold personality and even the occasional meanie at school.’Alison’s daughter

Mighty Girls love Song Bird

Mighty Girls love Song Bird Superhero

#12 Amazon Reviews HERE

#42 Goodreads Reviews 

Magazine Features

Touchstone magazine (disability) interviewed me about why I created Amy Hillcrest, science and engineering genius side-kick character who is wheelchair bound. HERE.

TOP Interviews for Song Bird

FROM Bullied teacher to Empowerment Author at Readilearn Zine

How to Write a Superhero Story Alison Stegert

SUPER DEAL … Special Offer

To celebrate my reviews, I offer Song Bird Superhero at a SUPER price AND Free postage anywhere in Australia. HERE.

Be Quick!  Seven days only and RRP will return back to normal.

Which Review OR Interview resonates with you the most?

WHY are superheroes important to us all?

Please comment below, LIKE,  Tweet, Google+ … Thanks 🙂

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Inspirational Magazine Features Song Bird Superhero

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Inspirational magazine, Touchstone features my book Song Bird Superhero.

Song Bird Superhero by Karen Tyrrell (that’s me) features twelve-year-old Amy with cerebral palsy. Amy is best friend and trusted side-kick of superhero Song Bird! Together they battle evil, adversity and bullying through singing, science and self-belief. Amy empowers herself using her mathematical and science brain, inventing new gadgets for her wheelchair to support Song Bird.

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Which inspirational magazine interviewed me?

Inspirational magazine, Touchstone published by Cerebral Palsy League, CPL interviewed me about my inspiration behind Song Bird Superhero. Their motto is Choice, Passion, Life. My story Bringing Superheroes to Life headlines on the cover of Touchstone magazine, Autumn 2017.

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Why did Karen Tyrrell create a character with Cerebral Palsy?

I’m an award-winning Brisbane children’s author. I present story-telling, pantomimes and creative writing in schools. I’m an ex-school teacher and have taught many children with disabilities. One little boy I taught was the inspiration for my side-kick character, Amy. He loved designing things and was the Maths and Science genius of my class, he just happened to be in a wheelchair.

I’m a survivor of bullying which eventually resulted with a mental illness (I’ve been well for 10 years). I talk to children about disabilities, diversity and breaking stereotypes. I teach children how to become strong and resilient.

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Why is Reading so important?

 Reading develops the mind of children, improving their language skills, igniting their imaginations and helping them to learn about the world around them.

Here’s an excerpt from Song Bird Superhero!

Amy scooted around me. ‘Why don’t you practise flying in your costume?’

‘Great idea.’ I started singing ♫ ‘I Believe I Can Fly’ ♫ and suddenly I was floating up into the air. The rotors vibrated under my hands and feet, but I didn’t know how to steer them. I flapped my arms fast. I smashed against one wall and bounced off another, and another, like a human ping-pong ball.

BOING. BOING. KER-PING.

Sing smooth, sing smooth, I told myself.

With a bit more practice, I was able to glide around the living room and into the family room with outstretched arms. I COULD DO IT! My heart sang. I’d never felt so free, so totally me.

Amy clapped and cheered. She opened the sliding door that led to the backyard. ‘Now go outside,’ she said. ‘Go on, I double-dare you.’

But what about Frank, the bully next door? I sucked in a deep breath and headed outside. I zoomed around the backyard, my body streamlined like a torpedo, hands by my side, feet together. I felt sensational as I flew around, creating my own wind.

The bushes behind the fence rustled. Frank yelled, screamed and stamped his feet.  ‘I’m going to get you.’

He knew!”

What other books have you written?

STOP the Bully, Bailey Beats the BLAH, Harry Helps Grandpa Remember

Jo-Kin vs Lord Terra … Jo-Kin Battles the It.

I write books for kids on empowerment, self-confidence and being kind to others.

Song Bird 2 comes out SOON!

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Where can families buy Song Bird Superhero?

To celebrate this magazine feature,  I offer a signed copy of Song Bird Superhero at a special discount price with FREE postage in Australia from my website:

www.songbirdsuperhero.com

Simply click on the Pay Now button for the special discount. Available NOW.

For overseas friends, Song Bird is available on Amazon HERE …  Song Bird Superhero

Happy Reading … Karen Tyrrell 🙂

Do my superheroes, Rosie and Amy inspire you to live strong?

How can we empower Kids with disabilities?

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Sponsorship Funds for my Next Book

sponsored-sliderWOOHOO! I, Karen Tyrrell, won a sponsorship for an upcoming writing project for the community.

I’ve waited and waited for this news for over a month. I can’t believe I actually did it!

As an award winner author, teacher and speaker, I’m thrilled and proud to be sponsored to create an empowering children’s book. I’m very passionate about the subject matter and how it will support children and families.

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What other Grants have I won?

I won three RADF grants.

One for the production of Alzheimer’s picture book, Harry Helps Grandpa Remember. Its endorsed by Alzheimer’s Australia, Arts Queensland and Logan City Council.

sponsorshipAnother grant for the editing of my award winning mental health recovery memoir, Me and Her: A Memoir of Madness. Its about me, a bullied teacher and my recovery from bullying and PTSD.

And one to complete  Year of the Edit writing course at Queensland Writers Centre to maximize my writing skills.

I shared my experiences and knowledge by presenting seminars on Getting Grants at Logan Art Gallery, Moreton Bay Libraries and Write Links.

What does my Sponsorship mean?

An important organization will proudly sponsor my book with funds and their support to help me share it to the community. So far, I’ve achieved Stage #1 of my goal.

Now, I will take this sponsorship to apply for a grant for the remainder of the production  and marketing costs, Stage #2.

Who will benefit from my Project?

Children, families, teachers, migrants, refugees, schools, pre-schools and the community.

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What’s your Project about?

It’s much too early to spill the beans. As soon as I receive the grant funds I will share all the details including my team of creative people and all project stakeholders. I promise!

Please WATCH THIS SPACE … and thank you 🙂

Thanks so everyone who supported my book this far. You know who you are. Hugs. xx

Can you please, please cross your fingers for me?

Who is excited as I am?

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Disney Princess Magazine Reviews Song Bird Superhero

 Disney Princess Reviews Song Bird SuperheroDisney Princess Magazine reviewed my empowering children’s book Song Bird Superhero by Karen Tyrrell.

(That’s me: kids empowerment author, speaker and school teacher!)

OMG! I can’t believe it!! Song Bird Superhero shares the magazine with all my favourite Disney characters: Cinderella, Snow White, Rapunzel, Belle and MORE.  I’m inspired by Walt Disney …

‘All our DREAMS can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them’- Walt Disney.

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WOOHOO!  Disney reviews Song Bird Superhero on the Princess Gems page where they shared “sparkly BOOK treasures.”

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There, Disney Princess reviewed books from well-loved children’s authors and illustrators. Three of these authors  happen to be my dear writer friends. 🙂

What is Song Bird Superhero about?

Song Bird Superhero empowers girls with the story of a bullied girl, Rosella Ava Bird who finds her superpowers from singing, science and believing in herself.

Song Bird Superhero is #1 in the Song Bird series.  #2 book is coming SOON!

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What did Disney say about Song Bird Superhero ?

A sweet empowering story about being bullied and believing in yourself. Science-mad Rosie is having a tough time – Her inventions keep crashing, she’s banned from the science fair and her nasty neighbor is bullying her.

Can her friend Amy, along with singing, science and self belief give her super powers?

An inspiring read by a great Australian author.  🙂

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Get your copy of Disney Princess ISS #88 for the full story …

Disney Princess magazine is jam-packed with entertaining and educational stories, puzzles, craft, cooking, games, quizzes and colouring-in activities. Plus reviews of books kids will LOVE.

Grab your copy at newsagents and supermarkets.

To celebrate, I offer Song Bird Superhero at SUPER discount!

Buy your copy of  Song Bird Superhero

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I’m incredibly gob-smacked with this review and appearing in Disney Princess magazine with my fellow authors. It IS a dream come true !!

 What do you like about Song Bird’s review?

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Supanova Gold Coast Showcases Superhero books

Supanova Gold CoastSupanova Gold Coast will host Karen Tyrrells empowering Superhero books for kids. (That’s me.)

My empowering superhero books include Song Bird Superhero, Jo-Kin vs Lord Terra & Jo-Kin Battles the It (Super Space Kids series).  Power packed with bully prevention, self-belief and perseverance messages.

 I’m so fired-up, I could explode into a zillion stars!

Supanova fans: Assemble your geek squad!

Supanova Gold Coast 2017 is coming! Jam-packed with scifi and fantasy superheroes from the screen and your imagination!

I’m SUPA excited to launch my empowering superhero books at Supanova Gold Coast.

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Song Bird at Supanova Brisbane 2016

 What’s SUPA about Song Bird Superhero?

Song Bird Superhero presents a female superhero for girls 6-12. Song Bird AKA Rosella Ava Bird battles Frank Furter, bully, evil child genius and mad scientist.

Song Bird inspires us to believe in ourselves … and fly high.

Karen Tyrrell and hubby Steve, will dress in cosplay. Me as Song Bird Superhero. Steve’s will cosplay a NEW character from Song Bird 2. TBA.

All Song Bird Superhero books will be signed with a certified Song Bird stamp.

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Super Space Kids at Supanova

 What’s SUPA about Jo-Kin, Super Space Kid?

Jo-Kin nerdy space hero AKA Joshua Atkins and the Super Space kids must save the galaxy from IT (in Jo-Kin Battles the It)

And they must save the galaxy from LORD TERRA (in Jo-Kin vs Lord Terra)

Can Jo-Kin defeat the IT and Lord Terra?

 MEET SUPA Stars at Supanova Gold Coast

Meet Sean Astin

Sean Astin starred as Samwise Gamgee in the Lord of the Rings trilogy. His role epitomizes hope, determination and loyalty.

David Boreanaz starred as Angel in Angel and Buffy the Vampire Slayer.

Marie Avgeropoulos starred as Octavia Blake in the  post-apocalyptic drama series The 100.

FREE OFFER

Supanova Gold Coast is FREE for kids under 12 accompanied by a paying adult.

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HOW do you Book for Supanova Gold Coast?

Tickets for Supanova Gold Coast are on sale NOW!
Buy your tickets ONLINE.

Where will you find me at Supanova Gold Coast 21-23 April?

Go to Artists Alley at Gold Coast Convention & Exhibition Centre,

Cnr Gold Coast Highway & TE Peters Drive, Broadbeach, Queensland 4218.

Fri 21 April 5-9 pm AND  Sat & Sun 10-6 pm

Follow Karen Tyrrell: Song Bird Superhero & Jo-Kin on social media

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Instagram https://www.instagram.com/karen_tyrrell

Twitter https://twitter.com/karen_tyrrell

Song Bird on Facebook https://www.facebook.com/songbirdsuperhero

Song Bird Superhero & Jo-Kin at SUPA prices

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SUPA OFFER = #1 Book for $15

                              #3 Books for $30  …  Supanova ONLY

WHO’s going to Supanova Gold Coast?

Please RSVP to my Facebook Event HERE

I can’t wait to meet you. 🙂

Finally, please comment below: Like, Google, Tweet, Facebook. 🙂

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Allison Paterson and her NEW book Shearing Time

3600_Allison-PAterson-WOIGMEET Allison Paterson and her NEW picture book Shearing Time

Allison Paterson writes as a children’s author, school librarian, and winner of a 2017 May Gibbs Fellowship. I met Allison at the recent Romancing the Stars event on the Sunshine Coast where we both were author STARS for the night.

On 1st March, Allison launched her picture book Shearing Time, illustrated by Shane McGrath.

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Shearing Time by Allison Paterson

Karen Tyrrell (that’s me) interviews Allison on How & Why she published Shearing Time

Q: Allison, tell me about yourself and why you write Australian history books for kids.

A: I grew up on a farm surrounded by sheep, dogs and chooks. I spent many years as a teacher librarian and I am now an author. My first book for children was the 2016 ABIA and CBCA longlisted title Anzac Sons: Five Brothers on the Western Front. It is the younger reader’s version of Anzac Sons: the Story of Five Brothers in the War to End All Wars, a true account of her ancestors’ service during WWI and based on a collection of over 500 letters my grandfather and his four brothers sent to their family. Then came Granny’s Place, a delightful picture book that explores the past and was inspired by my grandparents and childhood adventures on their farm.

Q. What is Shearing Time about?

A: Shearing Time is a companion tale to Granny’s Place and is loads of fun with cantankerous sheep, daring dogs, a shed of shearers that rumbles with the racket and a country kitchen that opens the door on the life of a country kid! It’s based on childhood memories of my favourite time of the year – Shearing Time – when the whole family worked together to get the job done!

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Q. How did you publish Shearing Time?

A: Shearing Time is my fourth book published by the wonderful team at Big Sky Publishing.

Q: Finally, can you share three of your publishing tips?

  • Persevere – believe in your work and surround yourself by people who believe in you.
  • My stories are set in the past and my reading choices are often historical fiction and non-fiction – write what you know and love to read yourself.
  • Plan, plan and plan – be organised!

Book Giveaway… Shearing Time by Allison Paterson WINNER BELOW

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 Allison Paterson is giving away a FREE signed copy of Shearing Time.  Thanks for leaving a comment below on my website for a chance to win a print copy.

And the Winner is Jacqui Halpin 🙂

 THANKS for Commenting below for a chance to win … LIKE, Tweet, Google + Share on Facebook.

 

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Edit your Book 10 Steps to PERFECTION

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Edit your Book: 10 STEPS to PERFECTION

YIPEE! Kai-ay!

I, Karen Tyrrell,  finished #9 critical steps in editing her action-packed children’s superhero novel, Song Bird 2.

This week, Song Bird 2 zoomed off to its crucial #10 step. Astute editing will transform it for publishing.

Why Edit your Book?

Editing polishes your writing until it sparkles and shines with the gloss of a professional. A polished piece of writing hooks a reader from the beginning, gripping them to the very last word. Thorough editing maximizes your chances of publishing. So your book rockets out to the world.

10 STEPS to Edit your Book

  1. Write the very BEST story you can. Create a page turning, intriguing story with compelling characters the reader really cares about. Hook the reader in on every page.
  2. Read your story out aloud to pick up any mistakes and flaws.

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3. STRUCTURAL EDIT:

Examine the overall structure of your story. Answer these questions.

**Does your story flow and make sense?

**First sentence: Is your first sentence powerful, hooking the reader in?

**First page: Does your first page anchor and orientate the Reader to the setting, the main character and the problem, hooking us even more? Does the first page set up the story and the conflict? VITAL: Do you care about the main character?

**Overall story arc: Does the story build up to a climax?

**Ending: Is the ending satisfying to the reader? Are all the questions answered and resolved?

**Are the story events sequenced logically? What’s missing from the story?

  1. Join a critique group, preferably one who meets face-to-face. Learn how to critique so you can critique writer’s manuscripts in exchange for yours. I recommend joining Write Links, if you write books for children.
  2. Submit your manuscript, in chapters to your critique group.
  3. Rewrite your manuscript several times, using positive feedback and suggestions from your Crit Buddies.
  4. Ask Beta readers (your most valued Crit Buddies) to read your entire manuscript and offer suggestions for improvement via comment boxes, concentrating on perfecting the structure. Rewrite again … and again.
  5. LINE EDIT your manuscript against a VIP list to improve each line

**Eliminate unnecessary modifiers which weaken your sentence i.e. possibly, simply, really, totally, very, supposedly, seriously, terribly, kind of, usually, extremely, almost, mostly, practically, probably, and quite.

Search for extraneous that’s and ands. Either delete or rephrase the sentence.

Eliminate all clichés. Replace with powerful prose or original metaphors and similes.

Replace repeated words and phrases with a different word for variety.

Check each sentence makes sense, taking the story forward. Delete unnecessary sentences.

Examine tenses and overall sentence structure is grammatically correct.

**Rewrite, rephrase, reconfigure. The more times you rewrite your sentences, the sharper they’ll become.

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  1. WORD EDIT your manuscript against this VIP list to improve the vocabulary.

Replace boring verbs e.g. get, give, sat, say, see, stood, use, want, walk with words and phrases that have energy

Swap lazy adjectives with better word picture and metaphors. e.g. easy, nice, interesting, wonderful, big, fine, bad, exciting, good, little, strange.

Delete adverbs ending in ly unless they change the way the verb behaves e.g. whispered loudly = OK but whispered softy = no-no.

Remove all unnecessary or overused words e.g. that, very, just, because, then etc

Amp every verb and noun to the MAX, to the strongest they can be.

Check spelling using spellcheck or a dictionary/ thesaurus

  1. Send your manuscript to the very best editor you can afford. I recommend a structural edit as well as a line edit to amp up your manuscript for SUPER success.

editingtypesHow did I, Karen Tyrrell edit my published books?

I joined a Brisbane face-to-face critique group for children’s writers Write Links. Each month I submit 2-3 chapters for critique and feedback. Then I rewrite them until they shine.

After 3 or 4 drafts, I sent my manuscript to three trusted Beta Readers … and followed ALL the steps above.

So far, I’ve successfully edited and published eight award-winning books to empower available from Amazon and book shops. I published Song Bird Superhero (Song Bird #1) in September 2016. Check out the reviews. HERE

NEWSFLASH… NEWSFLASH… NEWSFLASH… NEWSFLASH

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Song Bird Superhero (Song Bird #1)

YIPPEE! This week I sent my action-packed children’s novel, Song Bird 2 to my professional editor (who’s ex-Penguin and ex-Scholastic) via Book Cover Cafe  for a final comprehensive edit.

I can’t wait to announce my new book title and cover. I’m bursting with excitement 🙂 🙂

How do you edit YOUR book? … What do you recommend?

Thanks for reading. Please share your thoughts below.

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