YAY! I’ve amped JOSH AND THE IT to the MAX, completing a much improved version.
Last October an International Publisher requested JOSH AND THE IT, Book 1 of the Super Space Kids Series, and now she’s considering it for publication … incredible but true.
Why did I rewrite JOSH AND THE IT?
Last November I began creating Book 2, Josh vs. Lord Terra, part of the NaNoWriMo writing challenge. I completed the first draft in two weeks then I began the second draft in earnest.
As I scribbled and typed the third draft of Book 2, niggling notions spun round in my head. New plot sequences and character developments for Book 1 dominated my thoughts, inspiring me to rewrite JOSH AND THE IT. These ideas wouldn’t let me go.
How did I rewrite Josh and the It?
- Jotted down all new possibilities.
- Amped my voice throughout the story expressed through Josh’s thoughts.
- Researched new scenarios
- Checked through every chapter summary, searching for ways to improve my story
- Verified individual character tags were consistent through both books.
- Double checked every chapter of Josh and the It had a strong beginning and end, hooking the reader in.
- Raised the stakes to the highest level.
- Added MORE humour, MORE adventure, MORE food scenes that kids love.
What next?
I emailed the publisher, requesting if I could send my new amped up version.
Guess what she said?
YAY! Within ten minutes she replied, thanking me for my update and requesting the new version …What a positive response!
Woohoo! I’m in with a chance .
I’m hoping this wave of interest will carry ‘ME AND HER: a Memoir of Madness’ to its home … Fingers crossed xx
Well done Karen. I have my fingers crossed for you. I hope Josh conquors the universe.
Jeff
Thanks Jeffery, So do I. The publisher seems very keen so I’m hoping I’m on the brink of publishing :))
sounds good. fingers crossed too.
Graham.
Thanks Graham, Receiving positive vibes each time they email me. Karen :))
Congratulations Karen! You must be doing a happy dance.
The cosmic wheel has spun in your favour! Woo Hoo!
Thanks Renee, this last week’s been amazing and I’m happy dancing all over the place. Just want that wheel to keep turning. Good luck with your writing too:))
Congratulations Karen! I hope now all your hard work will pay off and that this is the break you’ve been waiting for. Fingers crossed. :))
Thanks Debbie, I’m pretty chuffed with the publisher’s response and interest and I hope they’ll be more enthused when I send Book 2 :))